Archive for February, 2011

Self-Editing for the Author

Tuesday, February 8th, 2011

Today I want to discuss a couple of editorial problems that I see in manuscripts and book proposals. I want you to avoid these things in your writing. I want you to become an astute self-editor. It will save you money for professional editing.

I’m not suggesting that you should cut the editor out completely—oh no. But the tighter your writing and the more editorially sound you can make it, the less time it will take your editor to go over it and the less cost to you!

Here are a couple of sentences I came across in manuscripts recently. I have changed them just enough so as to protect the identity and style of the writer:

“As a society, we have always depended on others, since the beginning of time.”

First, I advised this author to use either “always” or “since the beginning of time.” To use both is redundant. And I omitted the comma between “others” and “since.”

Here’s another example of redundancy:

“This is a new product that just came out.”

Some authors, in their book proposal synopsis refer to their project as, “my book” or “the book.” I typically suggest that they write “this book” or “the book I propose,” or the book title.

How about this one—the author writes, “Some writers forget to include an SASE with their manuscript. That is okay if they do not want a reply.”

I would opt for “this” in place of “that.” “This is okay…”

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Discounts on Books for Authors

Monday, February 7th, 2011

Patricia Fry is discounting two of her most popular books:

The Right Way to Write, Publish and Sell Your Book now $14.95.
This book has received numerous 5-star reviews by Patricia Fry’s peers. It is designed to help new and struggling authors to understand, thus more successfully navigate the publishing industry.

Publishing is more than just writing a good book. As I frequently tell authors, Publishing is not an extension of your writing. Publishing is a business and, in order to succeed as a published author in this fiercely competitive publishing climate, you must have an understanding of the business and the processes as well as all of your options, the possible consequences of your choices and your responsibilities as a published author.

The Right Way to Write, Publish and Sell Your Book is a definitive guide to successful authorship whether you’re writing fiction, nonfiction, poetry a children’s book or a memoir. It details critical information about the publishing industry in frank terms and includes numerous anecdotes and examples to illustrate the processes involved in successful authorship.

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Authors Finding Experts

Sunday, February 6th, 2011

Do you belong to an online discussion group or forum related to writing or to the theme/genre of your book project? If not, you should consider it.

While there are still writing groups meeting face-to-face, many of them have been replaced by online counterparts. Writers are connecting through social media programs, targeted message boards and discussion groups. You can also communicate with people who are interested in the topic/genre of your book. And this is something I recommend. What can you get out of connecting with others online?

• It’s a way to get word out about your book (or your book in progress).

• It’s a way to learn about what’s going on in your field.

• You will become aware of new trends and resources.

• You will meet people who can help with the promotion of your book.

• You’ll meet experts to interview for future books or promotional articles.

• You’ll get ideas for articles, books and blog topics.

• You might make a few new friends.

Just this week, people on one of my favorite discussion groups—SPAWNDiscuss—responded to a few questions I asked on behalf of clients and prospective clients. Not every writer/author has the same level and nature of experience and knowledge. And this is an important concept that many people neglect to embrace.

You might be an expert in your field, but there are still going to be people who know more about an aspect of your field than you do. There are people who have had different experiences and who have a keen interest in an area of the subject that you may not have explored. I am considered an expert in my field—publishing/book promotion. But I don’t know anything about producing, copyrighting or publishing plays, for example. Nor have I had wide experience publishing books for others. But some of our SPAWN members have. So I go to them when someone asks me questions in these areas.

If you do not belong to a discussion group or forum within the subject matter of your book, consider finding one or two and signing up. Here are a few directories to help you get started:
http://groups.yahoo.com
http://www.wallphone.com

You can also do an Internet search using keywords, “group” + (your subject)—“parenting multiples,” “agriculture,” “cooking,” “history-writing,” “fiction-writing,” “skydiving,” “breeding cats,” “photography,” etc.

I’d like to hear from those of you who follow this suggestion and who use these resources and find a suitable discussion group or forum. PLFry620@yahoo.com.

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How NOT to Approach Publishing

Saturday, February 5th, 2011

It seems that publishing is being discussed in many circles and in varieties of venues. People from all areas of interest and knowledge levels are writing books or talking about it. And discussions, as well as articles on topics related to writing and publishing are showing up at home décor, craft, parenting, pet, spiritual, etc. sites and forums.

You might see a comment, blog post or article about writing at a senior site you frequent, at your favorite gardening or travel site. The newsletter coming from your business, investment, cat breeders, pilots or boating association may run an article about writing a book.

And some of the most unlikely people are cropping up with books of their own—a clerk at your local supermarket, the gal who operates a bed and breakfast in town, your tax accountant, the wife of your personal trainer and the crazy woman you run into at the dog park every week.

It’s wonderful that so many people from all walks of life are able to express themselves through words, capture their memories on paper, share something meaningful with others or entertain readers with their storytelling skills. I know the joy of writing and of being read. Writing and publishing has been a huge part of my life for over 35 years. Coming with that territory, of course, is promotion.

Yes, I am pleased that people are living their writing/publishing dreams, but it upsets me to see so many of them going about it the wrong way.

What is the wrong way to approach a publishing project? Here’s the short list:

• Lack of knowledge about the publishing industry and no interest in or inclination to educate oneself.

• No financial backing—trying to launch a book without funds of any kind (for an editor, for book promotion and/or for actually publishing that book).

• Writing a book without making sure there is a true audience for it.

• Expecting a large return on your publishing investment.

• Lack of writing skills.

• Lack of research with regard to your publishing options.

• Signing a contract without fully understanding it.

• No interest in promoting your book.

If you recognize yourself in this list, you are a candidate for my book, The Right Way to Write, Publish and Sell Your Book. Herein, you will gain the understanding and the knowledge you need to more realistically plan and carry out your publishing project from start to a more successful finish no matter what your topic or genre is.

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5 Ways to Promote Your Book Without Changing Your Lifestyle

Friday, February 4th, 2011

Some authors that I meet when giving presentations and during consultations are reluctant to go out of their way to promote their books. They say, in essence, “It’s a good book, isn’t that enough?” Sure, they want to sell a gazillion copies, but they resist the marketing process. They just want to write.

The truth is that, whether your book is self-published, you have a traditional publisher or you’ve signed with a fee-based POD “self-publishing” company, you must participate in promoting it.

In my book, Over 75 Good Ideas for Promoting Your Book I outline a collection of no and low-cost marketing ideas. Granted, not all marketing techniques are for all authors. Each of us has our level of comfort. While I strongly urge authors to stretch beyond their comfort zones, there’s nothing wrong with starting the process in familiar territory.

By the way, I will be discounting this book “Over 75 Good Ideas for Promoting Your Book” and The Right Way to Write, Publish and Sell Your Book starting next week. Let me know if you’d like to be notified when the discount goes in effect. PLFry620@yahoo.com.

Here are five ideas for promoting your book while involved in the process of living your life.

1. Talk about your book everywhere you go. Show your book to your coworkers, clients, vendors, members at your gym, the waitress who takes your lunch order and your dry cleaner, for example.

2. Promote your book on the Internet. If you use the Internet to chat or conduct research anyway, why not do some promotion while you’re there. Go to the sites that reflect the subject of your book and get involved in chats, leave notes on bulletin boards, offer excerpts from your book for the site. A literary site may feature your poetry book on their author’s page. A gardening site would probably be thrilled to post information about your book on living wreaths.

3. Join clubs and organizations related to your book topic. Attend meetings and show your book around. Offer to give presentations reflecting your expertise. Donate books for special events. Get even more exposure by volunteering for some of the community service projects that these organizations promote.

4. Write letters to the editor. Watch newspapers and other publications for articles or letters that relates to the topic of your book. Then respond with information or opinions that reflect the content of your book. Be sure to include the title of your book in your letter.

5. Sell books on the road. Anytime you travel, take a dozen or so books with you to sell along the way. Arrange in advance with a bookstore or specialty shop to have a book signing while there. Send press releases to local newspapers announcing your event. Make sure the store has plenty of copies of your books to sell.

Here’s an idea: try at least one new marketing technique every month. Become a public speaker, for example, offer your book as a premium item, tap into the library market, create a promotional display to offer bookstores and specialty shops that sell your book or get added recognition for your book by entering it in contests.

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Are You Writing a Bulldozer Book?

Thursday, February 3rd, 2011

There are many reasons why a book doesn’t sell. Here are a few:
• The author doesn’t promote it.
• The cover isn’t appealing.
• The author isn’t well-known in this topic or genre.
• There’s no audience for a book on this topic.
• It’s a bulldozer book.

What is a bulldozer book? It’s one designed to change minds. The author’s intent is to push his or her opinions or beliefs onto the reader. He hopes to influence people to change a habit, make new choices, adjust an aspect of their lives.

Doesn’t this describe the self-help book? Well, not exactly. A self-help book generally offers information and instructions in a gentle, but authoritative way. The author of a successful self-help book researches his topic, his audience and the competition and writes a book that is needed/wanted. And then he or she promotes it to an appropriate audience.

The authors of bulldozer books see people getting fat on fast foods, they observe more sin than they can tolerate, they have a real adversity to smoking or they’re sick of hearing about cruelty to children, for example. This author has a beef with a segment of the population—a bone to pick. He’s on a mission. And so he writes a book designed to transform fast food junkies into vegetarians. He pens a book on how sinners can find God. He produces a stop-smoking book for the hardcore smoker. Or he writes a book on parenting for druggies.

There’s nothing wrong with wanting to make the world a better place or for trying to help someone take better care of him or herself or their families. Where authors of bulldozer books fail is in their approach and in identifying their target audiences.

Over the years, I’ve certainly gone on writing missions of my own. I wanted to help save children from abusive parents and animals from cruel situations. I wrote articles designed to teach parenting skills and proper, humane pet care. And I attempted to get them published in magazines that I thought would be read by my proposed audience—those people who needed to hear my message. The gatekeepers to those audiences, however—the editors—kept my articles from my targeted readership. The truth is, the readers weren’t interested in learning better ways and they wouldn’t have read my words of wisdom, anyway.

Now herein is the reason why bulldozer books fail. Members of the targeted audience aren’t interested in making changes. If they were, they would go in search of a general how-to or self-help book on the topic. They are not typically going to buy a book that is trying to force feed them your perspective—your truth.

Your book, which is designed to shame the lazy, unfriendly homeowner into cleaning up his yard and be more helpful to his neighbors, is not going to be welcomed by this audience. Your book intended to change the hearts of animal abusers, will go unnoticed, at least by this segment of readers. However, this is not to say that you shouldn’t write that book.

• Write it for children—gently and appropriately showing them the way to be responsible or how to care for animals.
• Change the focus so that it will actually attract the audience you want to reach—you can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar.
• Go ahead and write it and then promote it to an audience who cares.

Some stalled bulldozer books can be transformed into brisk selling books simply by changing the target audience. The book’s message might be reasonable, useful and valuable, it’s just that you’re pitching it to the wrong audience. It’s okay to preach to the choir. Instead of promoting your book, “Stop Dog Fighting, Now,” to dog fighters, pitch it to a public who wants to know what measures they can take to stop this barbaric practice. Rather than pushing your healthy eating book on fast-food addicts who love their lifestyle, make it available to folks who enjoy healthy eating and who crave more tips, hints and resources.

I suggest that hopeful authors ask themselves two questions before producing a book: Why do I want to write this book—Reason? And what is the purpose of this book? Respond truthfully and thoughtfully to these two questions and you will be less likely to write a bulldozer book. Another way to avoid inadvertently (or purposely) writing a bulldozer book, is to always write a book proposal as a first step.

If you did not write a book proposal and/or if you feel as though you are promoting your book to the wrong audience, read my ebook, The Author’s Repair Kit, Heal Your Publishing Mistakes and Breathe New Life Into Your Book. http://www.matilijapress.com/author_repairkit.html

Get Reviews BEFORE Approaching Publishers

Wednesday, February 2nd, 2011

What do you have to show potential publishers? What is your special kind of leverage when you are approaching a publisher with your book project? Do you have a dynamite book proposal? What are the most valuable aspects of your proposal?

Have you ever thought of adding book reviews—getting your book reviewed before it is a book?

We often collect testimonials from professionals within the topic of our books to include in our proposals. But have you considered soliciting actual reviews to help sell your manuscript to an agent or publisher? Here are some ideas:

• Contact experts and professionals in your field (the topic of the book) and ask if they would read your complete manuscript and write a 100-500-word review.

• Ask a few individuals from your perceived audience if they would read the book and comment.

• Offer guidelines for the expert and other readers to follow in writing the review—a list of questions, for example. I suggest this because not everyone is comfortable when confronted with the task of writing a book review.

• If you would like to include five reviews from experts, professionals and end users, solicit a dozen or more. Not everyone will respond.

It is possible that there will be some slightly negative feedback or some suggestions you will want to incorporate into your book before sending it off to a publisher. I finished my revision for my publisher this week—but someone brought up a question yesterday on a topic I want to include in the book. So I’m back at the drawing board. My deadline is more than a month away, but I will finalize the book within the next few days and send it in early.

Have any of you added reviews from professionals and/or end users with your book proposals? What were the results?

Looking For a Book

Are any of you familiar with “Start Your Own Self-Publishing Business” by Entrepreneur Magazine? I heard yesterday that there is an extensive interview with me in this book. I would be curious to see it and also to review the book for SPAWNews. I found the book on Amazon.com, but I would like to contact the publisher and get a review copy. So far, my search keeps dead-ending. Do any of you have an idea about how I can obtain a review copy of this book? PLFry620@yahoo.com.

Comments and Resources for Writers and Authors

Tuesday, February 1st, 2011

I got a call last night asking about publishing ebooks—which type of ebook to publish and what does it entail. I did not feel qualified to respond in any depth or detail to these questions, but I did come up with some books that might help the author. There aren’t many such books out, yet. That should be my next project, since there’s so much activity within the world of ebook production and sales.

In case you are interested the books I located are: Make Money Online: Write and Sell Ebooks by Scott Boyd; ePublish: Self-publish fast and Profitably for Kindle, Create Space, IPhone and Print on Demand by Steve Weber and How to Write and Publish Your Own eBook in as Little as 7 Days by Jim Edwards and Joe Vitale.

I had a conversation with a former student yesterday. She said she wanted to start making money writing articles. She is contemplating taking my article-writing course and she asked, “Do you make money writing articles, Patricia? How many articles do you write per month?”

Here’s my response, “While I once supported myself through article-writing—for quite a few years, actually, I no longer earn money that way. I still write a lot of articles, but they are designed to promote my books and position myself as an expert/professional in my field. Most of the publications/websites/ezines I submit to do not pay—a few do, but pay isn’t much.

So no, I am no longer relying on article-writing to support myself. My writing/publishing business has taken a different direction.

When I was at my prime, I would send out dozens of queries—sometimes as many as 50 per month. But remember, I was writing on a wide variety of topics. I would write maybe 10 articles per month—depending on how much research and how many interviews were involved. Essays and articles on subjects I know well go together much easier and quicker than those on topics I have to research and get expert quotes for. (But the latter article generally brings in more money.) I might sell anywhere from 3 to 8 articles per month—earning anywhere from $500 to $3,000 month.

There is nothing steady and nothing you can count on in the article-writing business. Some freelance article writers make much more than I did—most fail quickly. It is a pretty intense way to make a living. You have to be strongly committed and you should enjoy the process.”

This student then asked, if I thought she could earn a certain amount of money each month. I said, “It all depends on you. Someone who looks for the need, watches trends and submits enough timely ideas to the right magazines in a professional way can surely meet your goals. Someone who is short-sighted, unwilling to stretch and grow and is too narrowly focused— probably not…”

I received another nice comment from a student in my online book proposal course today. She said, “This course has been a tremendous help to me. I had written a draft of my book, but since taking the course, I realize I’m going to need to develop the story arc more. It is definitely worth the $200 and then some.” And we are only up to class number six—two more to go.

For more information about my online, on-demand courses, visit http://www.matilijapress.com/courses.htm Or contact me at PLFry620@yahoo.com