Archive for January, 2014

Make Your Characters Real

Wednesday, January 8th, 2014

I promised that today I would talk a little about how I develop my fictionalized characters. Well, one thing I do is try to make them real. I give each of them their own way of speaking and their own behavior patterns.

Sometimes when I edit manuscripts for other authors, I lose a sense of which character is speaking or pursuing some activity. The author assigns the same way of speaking with the same attitude and pet phrases to more than one character.

I let my fingers develop some of my characters. I don’t know if this ever happens to you, but I start typing and it is as if the story emerges from my fingers. I am somehow removed from the experience except as a spectator watching the story develop and the characters’ personalities surface.

Other times it’s pure torture trying to establish unique personal qualities and character flaws—all of which make for a real character profiles, right?

Once I’ve introduced (or I’ve been introduced to) a character, I try to stay true to their character traits as I write. Sometimes I AM that person when I write as him or her. But I still write down not only the description of that person and his or her traits and habits, but also their way of talking—phrases they might use. I do refer to my notes on occasion to make sure I’m not blurring the personalities of my characters.

In my Klepto Cat Mysteries, Savannah is a very different type of person than her aunt Margaret, but they can tune into one another—they can relate. They just speak differently and have separate ways of handling situations and challenges. Savannah’s sister is more like Aunt Margaret in looks, gestures and temperament. Iris is distinctly different as is Craig Sledge.

What’s really fun is developing the purrsonalities of the cats I write about. In story 4—which I actually finished writing yesterday—yes, I’ve completed the first draft. Well, I’ve brought in a kitten—she’s spunky and she’s sweet and she’s going to follow in Rags’s (the main cat character’s) paws as a bit of a kleptomaniac cat.

How does one develop animal personalities? I guess you have to know animals, their behavior, how they differ. You have to care about animals. In my mystery novels, the animals are animals. They don’t talk, except to say “mew,” “woof,” or “meow” occasionally. They do act and react, though, apropos to their individual personalities.

Great News

I received another 5-star review at Amazon for Catnapped and a 5-star review for Cat-Eye Witness. Always good to see. How seriously do I take reviews? Here’s my thing: I brag about the good reviews. I feel good about them. I take them seriously. When I get one that is not so flattering (and I think we all do), I shine it on—I say, “It’s just opinion—that’s all—doesn’t matter.” I do welcome reviews and, in fact, encourage them. Reviews influence readers, not so much by the stars awarded, but because a review brings attention to the book.

Exposure, exposure, exposure. That’s the name of the game, folks.

Announcement

I will hit a milestone with my blog entries soon. And I plan to offer gifts to my blog followers that week. So stay tuned toward the third week in this month. I will be generous.

Can any of you guess how many blog posts I’ve written just in this blog—what count this milestone will reflect? PLFry620@yahoo.com

The Fascinating Process of Writing Fiction

Tuesday, January 7th, 2014

Novelists find it interesting how other writers approach their stories. Some handle each of their books a little differently. While one story might practically write itself, the next one may take a whole new strategy.

I’m working on the fourth novel in my Klepto Cat Mystery series and notice that the process is a little different than the first three. I already have my main characters fleshed out. I only have to develop a few new ones that I’m adding to this book. While sometimes I have the entire story worked out in my head before I start writing, I’m watching this story emerge as I write. Now that’s an interesting process. I took a break yesterday to do a little photography in a nearby meadow (yes, it’s sunny and warm here in southern, CA). I couldn’t wait to get back to my office and find out what was going to happen next.

One thing I’ve done early on with all of my stories is to determine and double check the timeline. When there’s a lot going on and each event hinges on others, it’s important to keep your timeline straight. You can’t have your character out horseback riding when you’ve already established that they’re experiencing a100-year storm and he’s still recovering from a broken ankle. You can’t successfully introduce a piece of evidence as new if you’ve already talked about it a few chapters earlier.

Today I will finish the story—can’t wait to see how it ends. Got some exciting things happening.

Do you write fiction? Are there some mornings when you can’t wait to get out of bed and race to your computer? Most of my mornings are like that these days.

How do you approach your writing? What is the process you use to develop a story? Does it write itself or do you have a rigid outline?

Tomorrow I’ll talk a little about how I develop my characters.

Learn to Write Better Fiction

Monday, January 6th, 2014

My clients have taught me a lot about writing fiction. This might be a strange admission, but it’s true. I was editing fiction for quite a while before I started writing fiction. And I learned a lot by being subjected to the awkward passages, conflicting material, inconsistencies, incorrect punctuation, shallow dialog, lack of flow and so forth that I found in some manuscripts.

Sure you can learn a lot about writing fiction by attending classes, workshops and critique groups. You can read books on the subject. You can read a lot of fiction—especially in the genre you are writing. And I recommend all of the above.

I’m just saying that, for me, editing fiction before I started writing it served to give me a leg-up in this field and I’m grateful for that.

Tomorrow I want to talk a little about my process of writing a story. It may or may not be conventional or even helpful to other authors.

In the meantime, I’m ready to launch the third in my Klepto Cat Mystery series, Sleight of Paw and I’ve written 98 pages of Book Four, Undercover Cat. The first in the series, Catnapped, will be in print very soon. My goal is to have it available for Valentine’s Day giving.

Two books from this series are available now on Kindle at Amazon.com.

I am Patricia Fry and I’m the author of the Klepto Cat Mystery series. I’m also a book editor. If you’re ready, send me your manuscript. I’ll give you a sample edit and an estimate. Turn-around time is generally within two weeks, depending on the condition of the manuscript. PLFry620@yahoo.com

 

What Makes for a Boring Storyteller?

Sunday, January 5th, 2014

Writing fiction is a form of storytelling. But it isn’t the only form. While not everyone writes, everyone has had storytelling experience. We all share experiences verbally with others. Some of us repeat scenarios we’ve heard, try to recap something we’ve read or rehash an event that happened recently or in the past. And we each have our unique ways of doing this.

We’ve all met people who are entertaining—we could sit and listen to them all day. And there are others that we avoid at social gatherings because their stories are boring.

What makes the difference? Do you like to tell stories and get a reaction from friends and family? What sort of reaction do you get? Are you entertaining or boring? Do others enjoy listening to you as much as you enjoy talking?

Ouch! These are hard questions to consider, aren’t they? No one wants to admit they’re boring. I think that we all fall under both categories at one time or another. But certainly there are people who more typically fit into one or the other.

Let’s explore what makes an entertaining storyteller and some of the habits that might label someone boring.

We’re more apt to respond to a story we can visualize—so a clear description is important. But too much description makes a story drag and listeners become bored. We generally enjoy stories that move along at a good pace. Intrigue captivates most people. You want your audience to ask or to appear to wonder, “what happened next?” A good storyteller has a crisp and clear punch line.

What are some of the habits of poor storytellers—those that you avoid? Here are some of my pet peeves. They tell a story that’s not interesting to begin with. They clutter their story with unrelated and unneeded details, such as what street they lived on when they were 12 and what color each kitten in the litter was. The storyteller argues with him/herself as to whether this event occurred at 8 a.m. or maybe 8:10—no, closer to 8:05…Once the storyteller has his “victim’s” attention, he may take you on a very long trip in order to make his original point, which he may actually forget in the end.

Boring storytellers often spend time working things out in their own minds as they talk. In fact, they go inward. In some cases, you can walk away and the speaker won’t even notice because he is reliving the story within himself rather than being cognizant of the story he is telling. These are definitely two different story types—the one you relive and the one you share with others.

Some people definitely have a knack for storytelling. And one of their techniques is to be aware of their audience. They present outwardly. They are cognizant of their audience, how receptive they are, and they know how long to drag out or how quick to end their stories.

The next time you tell a story, pay attention not to how it feels to be “on stage,” but how your story is affecting the other person. Often it is the feedback that creates a good story—that is as long as the storyteller is willing to acknowledge and accept it.

The other part to storytelling is listening. I have one pet peeve when it comes to listeners. It’s the one who shouts out the punch line, or who jumps into the middle of your story to comment or criticize.

I’ve done a lot of public speaking and I’ve even experienced a heckler or two. Some people are just born hecklers. They don’t have the confidence to tell their own story—they don’t feel they can be heard any other way, I suppose—so they take some of the limelight from those who can attract a crowd. Or, perhaps, the person who shouts out is trying to tell the storyteller his story is boring and he’s ready to stop listening.

I’m Patricia Fry and I’m the author of several books for authors, including Talk Up Your Book, How to Sell Your Book Through Public Speaking, Interviews, Signings, Festivals, Conferences and More. It’s at Amazon.com in print, Kindle and audio and at most other online and downtown bookstores.

 

Thousands of Publications Where You Can Promote Your Book

Saturday, January 4th, 2014

This week I’m sharing links to directories that authors can use to promote their books. Here are a few more that are listed in my book Promote Your Book.

Magazine Directories

http://www.writersmarket.com

http://www.woodenhorsepub.com

Newsletter Directories

http://www.newsletteraccess.com

http://www.ezinehub.com

http://www.ezinelocater.com

Newspaper Directories

Http://www.newspapers.com

http://www.onlinenewspapers.com

http://www.thepaperboy.com

http://www.50states.com/news

How would I recommend using these links?

  • Locate publications that post book reviews.
  • Send a press release announcing your book.
  • Submit articles or stories designed to promote your book.

For hundreds more links, ideas and tips for promoting your amazing book, order your copy of Promote Your Book, Over 250 Proven, Low-Cost Tips and Techniques for the Enterprising Author. I’m Patricia Fry, the author. You can order this book in print, Kindle or audio at Amazon.com and most other online and downtown bookstores.

More Online Directories for Authors

Friday, January 3rd, 2014

Here are links to more directories for authors.

Cover Designers

http://www.guru.com

http://www.onlinedesignerdirectory.com

Book Distributors

http://www.ibpa-online.org/pubresources/distribute.aspx

http://www.bookmarket.com/distributors.htm

http://www.morganprinting.org/Resources1.html

Fulfillment Services

http://www.bookmarket.com/4.htm

http://morganprinting.org/Resources1.html

Social Media Sites Directories

http://www.stumbleupon.com

http://www.socialmediawebsites.com

http://traffikd.com/social-media-websites

I am Patricia Fry and these resources are from my book, Promote Your Book, Over 250 Proven, Low-Cost Tips and Techniques for the Enterprising Author. Available at Amazon.com in print, for Kindle and audio. Also available at most other online and downtown bookstores.

 

Start Your Internet Searches With Directories

Thursday, January 2nd, 2014

Often I share information from one of my books. Today, I’d like to talk about something I  cover in both Publish Your Book and Promote Your Book—directories. I’m big on directories. Why? If I’m looking for book reviewers, mail order catalogs, newsletters, booksellers, cat-related blogs, newspapers or writers conferences, for example, doesn’t it make sense to seek out a whole bunch of them at once rather than one at a time?

And the way to find a whole bunch at a time is through directories. There are directories of publishers, libraries, magazines, museums, bookstores, radio hosts, mailing lists, editors, artists…Heck, you might even find directories of motorcycle parts stores, science fiction authors, horse whisperers, bird watcher groups…

Today, I thought I’d share with you some of the directories I’ve discovered—all of these are listed among scads, oodles, gobs and tons more resources, tips, ideas and solid information in Promote Your Book, Over 250 Proven, Low-Cost Tips and Techniques for the Enterprising Author.

Directories of affiliate programs

http://www.affiliatescout.com

http://www.100best-affiliate-programs.com

http://www.linkshare.com

Directory of book reviewers

http://acqweb.org/bookrev.html

http://dir.yahoo.com/arts/humanities/literature/reviews

http://www.stepbystepselfpublishing.net/free-book-reviews.html

Directory of colleges and universities

http://www.braintrack.com

http://www.50states.com/college

Directory of conferences in a variety of topics

http://shawguides.com

http://www.allconferences.com

http://www.bvents.com

Tomorrow I’ll post links to directories of cover designers, distributors, forums/message boards and fulfillment services.

Promote Your Book is available at Amazon.com in print, Kindle and audio. You’ll also find it at most other online and downtown bookstores.

I’m Patricia Fry, the author of this book and several others for authors.

http://www.matilijapress.com and http://www.patriciafry.com

 

How to Promote Your Novel

Wednesday, January 1st, 2014

For years, I’ve been advising authors to promote their books through articles. This is highly recommended for nonfiction authors. What better way to get your name out there in front of your potential readers and to become known in your field or topic. Whether your expertise is quilting, gardening, cat behavior, storytelling, baking, investing, animal rescue, photography, technology, decorating, marketing or communication, you can gain additional credibility in your field by writing articles for magazines, newsletters, the web and so forth. And don’t you know, that credibility will mean sales.

I’ve also advised fiction authors to use their writing skills to promote their novels and children’s books. How? Here are a few ideas:

  • For a children’s book, submit articles or stories related to the theme of your book—kindness to animals, sleepovers with friends, understanding money issues, etc., in magazines or on websites for children. You can also write informational articles for publications read by parents, grandparents and educators—the importance of teaching kids money-awareness, for example, or how to monitor a sleepover for kids of various ages, or tips for bringing a pet into the home where there are small children, or how to dole out and manage responsibilities for caring for a pet.
  • For a novel, write about your experiences writing the novel, what goes into the research for a novel like yours, etc.
  • Expand on some of the events, eras and places you’ve used in your novel to create interesting educational/informational articles for your potential readers.
  • Write short stories for literary and other magazines and websites to get your name out as the author of books in this genre.
  • Establish a blog and post often. Use some of the ideas above to create fresh material. Perhaps write your next novel through blog posts—let your readers help you write it. Run a contest to determine the name of a new character for your series, for example.

One author I know keeps readers interested by sharing little known facts about the people and the times depicted in her western novels. As the author of a mystery, write short mysteries for readers to solve—audience participation.

As you know, I am now writing novels after 40 years of writing nothing but nonfiction. I’ve done many things to promote my novels so far—perhaps I’ll share some of them in a future post. One promotional activity is writing articles. I’ve come up with about half dozen articles so far for writers. And, as we all know, writers are also readers. So not only am I, perhaps, helping writers in some way, I am also promoting my revved up cozy mysteries, Catnapped and Cat-Eye Witness.

If you’ve written a novel and you want to write more of them, you absolutely must embrace the huge task of promotion. Unless you promote, promote, promote, your novel will likely stay very private. No one will know about it, so no one will buy it. What a waste of a brilliant piece of work.

I’m Patricia Fry and I’m the author of several books for authors, including Promote Your Book, Over 250 Proven, Low-Cost Tips and Techniques for the Enterprising Author. Is this book designed for novelists as well as nonfiction authors? Absolutely!!! Order your copy at Amazon.com. It’s in print, Kindle and audio. Also available at most other online and downtown bookstores for $19.95.