Guest blogger: Sandra Murphy
(Read part one of this post March 17, 2011)
Reading complete works
At WUTA (Writers Under the Arch), when a member chooses to read his or her novel to the group, it can take over a year—four pages at a time. In Big Books, a subgroup, the writer distributes the full novel or screen play. We don’t line edit but read for continuity and plot, dialogue and description, pacing and placement. After reading, we can say, “You had three fight scenes in a row and then four nights spent at his desk—mix it up. Repetitive words are more obvious —the character spouts her signature line of ‘oh jumping jelly beans!’ every fifteen pages, lose 75 percent of them.
What is the goal of the group?
BIW’s goal is to make me write. WUTA’s is to make me write better. And Big Books is to get a book agent/publisher ready.
What is your goal?
Chris said, “I needed intelligent criticism from those who have actually written something in a workable format. WUTA provided it. Every story I ever published had WUTA input.”
“WUTA officially started in1994 when Robert Hazel put a note in the suggestion box at the independent bookstore. Forty-one people showed up the first night. The setup of read aloud and then critique started from the very first,” Cindy remembered. “With an average of fifteen people showing up week after week, even on holidays and during bad weather, we must be doing something right.”
Edwina thinks it’s the intelligence, sharp wit and the banter, not to mention the reciprocal respect. Erin agrees, “My writing has gotten stronger. The group not only helps the piece get better but sharpens my skill as a writer.”
The summation
To get the best results from a writer’s group, find one whose goals meet your own. Look for constructive criticism, a mix of genres so you can learn other styles, and varying levels of experience. Steer clear of a group that returns your copies in shreds or with smiley faces and “I love everything you write” at the top. Neither will help you improve.
Remember,
1. BIC HOK TAM (butt in chair, hands on keyboard, typing away madly)
2. Critique with kindness—they’ll read yours next.
3. Lose that jelly bean saying. It’s annoying.