My story is written and I’m going through some of the processes to make sure it works—that it is believable. I’m trying to respond to questions readers might have, such as How did the stalker know where Colbi was hiding out? Isn’t it too soon after her near death to be left alone? Would a homeless person actually set up housekeeping in someone’s out-building? Would a feral kitten actually become friendly and make a good pet? How did Damon get from here to there?
When you write a book for publication, always keep your audience in mind. If what you write cannot be deciphered, followed or believed by your readers, you’ve failed them.